You do a great job of balancing Eleven's "innocence" with her...I don't want to say world weariness, but the girl has seen some shit so it's not like she's just super innocent or anything either. But there is definitely an innocence about her from having not grown up in the "Real world" and you do a good job of that part! I also agree with what someone up there said about capturing her speech patterns. I struggle with that the most in my own writing, so I'm always impressed with people who can do it via tags in RP.
I have had so much fun with you in the thread we are doing and I definitely look forward to trying out more in the future.
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I have had so much fun with you in the thread we are doing and I definitely look forward to trying out more in the future.